WOW :O

These are excellent! I wish I could write dark material in the fresh, original way you do... every time I try, it just ends up sounding like your average crappy, low-quality teenaged angst.

Keep up the great work!

Hazellin of the Perpetual Questions

i liked both of them a lot, especially the second one. please keep writing, you're awesomeshadowofyou

WOW these are all brilliant! i love them they are dark, they still hold a beauty in them. I really like them! keep on with the writing, your work is brilliant and i cant wait to read more! :D

i'm going to keep add to this file