Reviews for Devoid and Devotion

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Insane plus Insomniac makes... 2008-10-15 ch 5,	Update?
Karmen-Blue-I's 2008-08-31 ch 5,	So far so good. I love Tag, you've done a great job creating her and I can't wait to see the character deveolpment you make with her. Please update this story soon, I really can't wait to see where you take things.
OH FOR THE LUV OF GOD it bu... 2008-08-25 ch 5,	Hey...HEY! GET BAC HERE ND FINISH THE STORY! he he, giggle giggle
hulha 2008-06-24 ch 5,	o my.
xXReader.Desu.YoXx 2008-05-15 ch 5,	i dont know what the heck i just read but for all its worth- i want to read more. && You shud update soon. Thanks :D I lvoe this story, Your so creative. -my simple review :D
procrastinatenow 2008-04-05 ch 5,	Super story so far - normally I'm not into science fiction but this is really floating my boat. Update soon! Jorgia.
Enaid 2008-03-29 ch 5,	ahh im kinda confused... but i like it. tag greatly amuses me. yaay for craziness
Toxic Panda 2008-03-23 ch 5,	Love her insanity. Great character. Update?!
Mikki Amboree 2008-02-04 ch 5,	chews on your head Where art thou author of this amazingly gripping story? pouts Hope to get those promised chapters soon! :)
VexiVicious 2007-12-20 ch 5,	Wow- SO GOOD. I can't wait to find out more
Emellie Worsham 2007-11-20 ch 1,	Wow, that was really intense, I liked it a lot. Liat just had me read it and I'm glad she did, you've got talent!! Great job.
Lady Silver fang 2007-07-09 ch 5,	I loved this chapter the best. Tag is so funny. I love her completely. I wonder how she's going to respond to "You are four-hundred and fifteen years old" Part. I can already see her saying some rather "interesting" things. Heh. I look forward to your next update!
Above All Countenance 2007-07-09 ch 5,	Whoa. That's all I can really say.. And that you need to update ASAP. Some parts in the last few chapters were kind of confusing. You might want to reread them. It took me a few seconds to realize that the beginning of chapter five was a flashback.. Man, this is a really good story, though. You have to update. -AAC
Above All Countenance 2007-07-09 ch 2,	Okay, great so far. that,and then I would'vekidnapped her = that, and then I would've kidnapped her I love Weezer, by the way. :) Yay! Rofl. Lifetime movies do suck... Okay, barely understand the whole her walking to the door thing. Confused me a bit. Okay. I'm sorry but...what the -hell- is going on? I'm assuming it's a dream, though. But you know what happens when you assume. (You make an ass out of "u" and "me.") So reading you next chapter right now.. -AAC.
Etenebris 2007-07-08 ch 5,	Well, really, what DO you get the girl who has everything? You bring her back from the dead, that's what! Well, anyway, I should seriously be commending you on the first part here, the one about Tag's father. You wrote so eloquently, especially in your realism regarding the "bee in my belly button" bit. At that moment, Tag was human, pure and simple. You break hearts as easily as I break a pencil: With moderate effort, considering my severe lack of upper body strength. Okay, fine, here's a better simile: You break hearts as easily as Joss Whedon does. Better? I thought so. (Really, though. This chapter was a little reminiscent of "The Body", and in a good way; it wasn't as if you were copying Dawn's reaction, but, rather, both hers and Tag's were realistic on the same level.) However, I'm feeling a little iffy about Tag's rants, i.e. the thing about Mr. Simon's toupee. While excellently written, I'm wondering if they perhaps detract from the story. Then again, it's very Tag to go on a short rant, isn't it? This is an interesting dilemma. Well, final word is: Keep the rants. Why did I even type this paragraph, then? Pft... Gideon...I actually wrote a story about that entire name. Or, rather, a name that looks like it. Whatever, same thing. I love his character, though, or maybe I'm just attracted to Tag's reactions to him. Especially the "Not magically, I know that's what you were thinking" thing. We all know people like him in real life. And well ALL just want to give them a golf club to the face, don't we? Come on, admit it... Overall, wonderful chapter. Welcome back into the fray!

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