 Secret Lakehouse 2009-08-20 . chapter 5I like the idea of this story, but everything is happening so quickly, and I'm confused about a lot of things. I'm sure you'll explain them, but still.
Tag is an intesresting character, but where did the whole Merlin thing come from? |
 riskkeybusiness 2009-02-25 . chapter 5 It almost makes me want to cry that you haven't updated in such a long time. For the longest time I've been looking for a story with a good plot and would hold my interest and this story does more than that.. I just wish I had looking to see the last time you updated before I actually became emotionally invested in this story.
But in other words, I love it, it's very unique and it stands out from all of the other stories here on fictionpress and I think it's outstanding. I would be overcome with joy if I ever found out you continued this story. |
 Status-Writing 2008-12-11 . chapter 5Amazing story!! So far I have thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you continue to write and post it. :D
Status |
 - MyDecoy - 2008-12-06 . chapter 5WOW!
I cannot tell you how much
I enjoyed and loved this story so far. |
 Insomnia Breeds Insanity 2008-10-15 . chapter 5Update? |
 Isa The Great 2008-08-31 . chapter 5So far so good. I love Tag, you've done a great job creating her and I can't wait to see the character deveolpment you make with her. Please update this story soon, I really can't wait to see where you take things. |
 DragonFairie 2008-08-25 . chapter 5Hey...HEY! GET BAC HERE ND FINISH THE STORY!
he he, giggle giggle |
 hulha 2008-06-24 . chapter 5 o my. |
 xXReader.Desu.YoXx 2008-05-15 . chapter 5i dont know what the heck i just read but for all its worth- i want to read more.
&& You shud update soon.
Thanks :D
I lvoe this story,
Your so creative.
-my simple review :D |
 procrastinatenow 2008-04-05 . chapter 5Super story so far - normally I'm not into science fiction but this is really floating my boat.
Update soon!
Jorgia. |
 Enaid 2008-03-29 . chapter 5ahh im kinda confused... but i like it. tag greatly amuses me. yaay for craziness |
 DLG903 2008-03-23 . chapter 5Love her insanity.
Great character.
Update?! |
 Mikki Amboree 2008-02-04 . chapter 5*chews on your head*
Where art thou author of this amazingly gripping story?
*pouts* Hope to get those promised chapters soon! :) |
 VexiVicious 2007-12-20 . chapter 5Wow- SO GOOD. I can't wait to find out more |
 Emellie Worsham 2007-11-20 . chapter 1 Wow, that was really intense, I liked it a lot. Liat just had me read it and I'm glad she did, you've got talent!! Great job. |