I like the idea of this story, but everything is happening so quickly, and I'm confused about a lot of things. I'm sure you'll explain them, but still.

Tag is an intesresting character, but where did the whole Merlin thing come from?

It almost makes me want to cry that you haven't updated in such a long time. For the longest time I've been looking for a story with a good plot and would hold my interest and this story does more than that.. I just wish I had looking to see the last time you updated before I actually became emotionally invested in this story.
But in other words, I love it, it's very unique and it stands out from all of the other stories here on fictionpress and I think it's outstanding. I would be overcome with joy if I ever found out you continued this story.

Amazing story!! So far I have thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you continue to write and post it. :D

Status

WOW!
I cannot tell you how much
I enjoyed and loved this story so far.

Update?

So far so good. I love Tag, you've done a great job creating her and I can't wait to see the character deveolpment you make with her. Please update this story soon, I really can't wait to see where you take things.

Hey...HEY! GET BAC HERE ND FINISH THE STORY!
he he, giggle giggle

o my.

i dont know what the heck i just read but for all its worth- i want to read more.
&& You shud update soon.

Thanks :D

I lvoe this story,
Your so creative.


-my simple review :D

Super story so far - normally I'm not into science fiction but this is really floating my boat.
Update soon!
Jorgia.

ahh im kinda confused... but i like it. tag greatly amuses me. yaay for craziness

Love her insanity.
Great character.
Update?!

*chews on your head*

Where art thou author of this amazingly gripping story?

*pouts* Hope to get those promised chapters soon! :)

Wow- SO GOOD. I can't wait to find out more

Wow, that was really intense, I liked it a lot. Liat just had me read it and I'm glad she did, you've got talent!! Great job.