Distance clouds the joy, brings sorrow to it when focused onto... for all.

oh wow. theres so much emotion to this, really wonderful piece of wrtiting. you capture so much in it i love: "I watch from this front porch step/While he spins/

And spins," fantastic imagery.

Wow. I really can't find any words to describe how I feel after reading that (I'm not that great on expressing my views on love poems), but I still enjoyed reading this! Very well written. Keep writing!

Lunchi