|Reviews for 5 Days, Then What?|
| Spiral Artist 8/1/05 . chapter 1
Distance clouds the joy, brings sorrow to it when focused onto... for all.
| citrus scented 8/1/05 . chapter 1
oh wow. theres so much emotion to this, really wonderful piece of wrtiting. you capture so much in it i love: "I watch from this front porch step/While he spins/
And spins," fantastic imagery.
| Chell-o Bodello 7/31/05 . chapter 1
Wow. I really can't find any words to describe how I feel after reading that (I'm not that great on expressing my views on love poems), but I still enjoyed reading this! Very well written. Keep writing!