Hi! Long time no talk. ^_~

The imagery was vivid and intense. I liked the persona's attitude in the poem, I found it comforting.

~Doray

A very interesting view on suicide. I would think more of sadness than victorious. A wonderful poem. Good work.

~Leeona Trance

Awesome rhyming, and really strong...but I can't say I like the content with my knowledge of you. ::huggles::

Wow, the rhythm makes it so chilling.

Won? Yeah. Sure. NOT. There's no greater way to lose than to stop fighting.