This is muy perdito. I really like the concept of seeing, hearing, and feeling someone from far away. (My boyfriend lives four states away, maybe that's why.)

Just thanking you for your review. I can totally understand how C.S. Lewis would make me look bad! :D Looking forward to meeting that guy when I finally ditch /my/ earthly loves for good.

This is the most beautiful expression, (I've always loved the Spanish language, something creepy seductive about it). Loved reading this, keep it up!

a truly beautiful and inspiring poem. it's descriptive without using too many descriptions. i love it, keep up the good work