yikes, she took on 24 men at once!? That's one person I wouldn't like to meet down a dark alley...lol. I love the detail you use when you're describing her fighting the bandits - it really makes it come alive. Update soon! :)

This is just like the Princess Bride!"I have spent the last few years building up an immunity to iocane powder." Anyway, another great chapter Masako. And thank you for sending your gracious e-mail.

Khazia*~

Brilliant job Masako Moonshade. You capture everything so well. Bloody brilliant job.

(And thank you for reading my novel. It means a lot to me.)

Dang. That's deep. Masako, you've gotta help me on this one. I'm not a member of fictionpress.com, so I can't get any e-mails about updates. If it's not too much to ask, could you spare an e-mail here and there when you get a new chapter up? I have to read what I inspired, after all.This is amazing, by the way. I'm truly spellbound here.

Always a friend and fan,Khazia*~

I love this! The plot is excellent, and your use of language is amazing! Update soon - I want to know what happens! :)

Masako Moonshade, you are amazing. I love your writing to death. This is so amazing. I can just imagine every detail, every movement, every thought, every smile, frown, everything...everything is so vivid and amazing. Wonderful job Masako Moonshade. Wonderfully done.

Gave me chills! I really like the tone you've set, very dark. Nice work!

It's wonderful to read your writing Masako Moonshade. I'll continue to read until it is no longer possible. For I am your humble reader.

Yay! I'm an inspiration! I like it very much. I always did think that your pen name was inspired, and it's good to see it being used for a character. Have fun with this...I'll keep up.

Khazia*~