everytime i read this chapter, i can't help but smile

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Cute story, i enjoyed reading it :)

It was awesome! I had never read a story like this one 1 for sure I thought that lance was lying when he say that he was Talon but I am happy that I was mistaken and that he and anthony stay are so cute together:) I think I love both dearly Talon because of his shyness and Anthony because of his blundness he is not scare of what to fact I really like it good job.

I love this! I want more. Please?

Oh my god this is sweet! Like- sh t- holy spitfudge- it's coated with cavity inducing sweetness! I don't know what to say! I can't believe it's the end! Want more. Need more. Now I can't sleep! Gah, the sugar is meeeeeelting me! I am so going to read more of your stories!

Just too cute! & such a clever concept! Very well done!

OMG! I loved it! The ending was so hilarious and I was so glad that Talon and Anthony got together in the end. I loved your writing style for this story, it made it really fun to read! Anyways, it was awesome like all your stories.

This is such a brilliant story. I think its great you managed to do a complete story in letter/note form, and it totally worked. So glad it worked out and everything in the end, and he got his revenge on Kyle :D

i love this story! i have read it 2 times and i cryed the secont time. o and dont mess with S.P.E.D it cant be helped. that is the only thing i dislike about the story is the sped jock nere the begening.
fatily yours
Bradley

I just have to say that I love this story so, so much. I think it's really cute :). I guessed who Talon was pretty much as soon as he was introduced, but still it was all very well done.

Fuck you...write more

this story was amazing i dont want it to end

awesome

LOL that pink leotard i love that part bravo on the story really liked that part it cracked me up keep doing an awesome job praises yewww