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| TwilightZelda 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWow...I like this so far. I'd hate to have to do a project like that too. Anthony sounds like he's going to be a fun character to read about. |
| Flaming Jello 2008-04-25 ch 28, | abuseOMG! This story was amazing!! I need to read the sequel!! Please tell me there's a sequel. o.O Well this story was beautifully written, and I enjoy and respect your format. I think all storys should make the reader become engaged in the material! Please, again, write more. Smiles and Sunshine. |
| Amopet4 2008-03-24 ch 28, | abuseAw... ^^ |
| Lovedward48 2008-03-24 ch 28, anon. | abuseYAY! I love it! AWESOME! I guess there's nothing much more to say. I mean I can't complain about anything and if I had to write down what I loved I had to write a never ending book(review)! I loved the letters and notes and journal entries. There was so much action and emotion without actual action...lol I love how they express themselves in form of what I wrote above. I love the plot as well. I loved it when Talon begged for forgiveness and Anthony(being who he is) ignored him completely. In other stories they fogive way too fast (besides, I love T. begging A. for forgiveness) It was awesome that they finally kissed and I think intimidating people like A. are HOT. But from what you described I think T. is just as hot. I knew that A. had missed to actually ASK if T. was gay so I kinda saw it coming. They really fit together and I love their completely diffrent personalities and how they attract each other. It was so cute and I enjoyed reading it so much. Good did an incredibly good job. Damn! I wanted to keep this review short but..I couldn't help it! XD Hope you don't mind my rambling too much. But I could go on forever about how awesome this fic is! I really love this story and I put some weight into these word so don't underestimate them. ;) |
| CrayonMentality 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseI really like the style of this- it makes it fun to read. Anthony is so grumpy as well. XD |
| FrankieG 2008-03-13 ch 28, | abusei laughed my ** off reading this!!seriously,the best one ive read so far.n trust me,ive read a lot =) SEQUEL!! |
| abbybyrd 2008-02-25 ch 27, | abuseOops! lol i was so eager to add you to my favorites that i hit the submit button before i finished reviewing. Again, this story is amazing and the relationship between the characters is so realistic! Also, I thought you said there would be a sequel but i looked and couldn't find one. I think a sequel is a great idea!! You should totally do it! |
| abbybyrd 2008-02-25 ch 28, | abuseYay! This was absolutely wonderful!! I totally wasnt expecting that Lance was actually Talon! |
| SkyFallOuch 2008-02-08 ch 28, | abuseReally cute and simple. I loved the story!! :D |
| Rocks Beneath the Water 2008-01-30 ch 28, | abuseThis story was cute. I love it. :) |
| PindrakeCake 2008-01-29 ch 28, | abuse:) rofl. Loved it. |
| raelia 2008-01-01 ch 28, anon. | abusesequel! sequel! please? |
| Somniorum 2007-12-25 ch 28, | abuseI love this story! You're such an amazing writer! |
| Niedy 2007-11-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust read the whole story... really cute... and funny... the letters work really well for this story... liked it a lot :) did you actually ever write a sequel (I'm curious how things went after that... with Kyle and Talon and the families and stuff...)? It says in the last chapter that you were thinking about it :) Greetings, Julia |
| Jenny Hatter 2007-09-02 ch 28, | abuseDear FeatherJunkie, I. Adore. And. Love. This. Story. This is such a cute story. And, it's all letters/ journal entries. There aren't many like this story. Original as well. I liked it all. Chapters one all the way to twenty-eight, the whole Lance is actually Talon, and Antony liking Talon before he knew it was Lance. Such a cute pairing. And, and, and! It's amazing! Woo hoo! A slash story that's amazing! Cheers, cheers, and cheers! There aren't many slash stories online and few are good. This is one of those few stories. And, you said you'd make a sequel! S-E-Q-U-E-L. I think I'm hyperventalating. Eek! Wicked beyond all wickedness. I will review for it. Every chapter, too! You've got my review for it. You now have a big fangirl who's favoriting you on her top fav author list. Ha ha ha. Keep up the spectacular writing, Valentine Satiguss. |