Like it :D its fun :) well written too...

I couldn't help but read this from beginning to end. It made me laugh quite a bit. I loved both the characters, and how they each had their flaws.

Although, I was a bit shocked to find out who Lance really was. I thought, like everyone else, that he was just jealous of the fact that Anthony liked Talon. But boy, you sure surprised me.

And, I thought that it ended perfectly. Kyle got his. Oh yes he did.

LOVE! LOVE LOVE LOVE!

That was amazing. I read it and I laughed out loud and almost cried. I didn't know what would happen and the entire thing kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Talon being Lance didn't even cross my mind. I just thought Lance was jealous as hell, but then when it happened, it made complete sense. Did you know that was how you were going to write/end it? The ending was amazing, too. I loved how Anthony humiliated Kyle/Wilfred at the end. Amazing job.

~Rei

Aw! That was so cute, half way through i was so confused as to weather or not i wanted Talon or Lance to end up with Anthony, but when i found out they were the same person i was so happy. The plot twist was really well placed, it was such a sweet story and the ending was cute too.

xD!!
awsomeness!
it's soo cool
and it actually sounds really realistic like it could seriously happen.
o.o
then again the world is weird like this... xD

That was great! xD I really enjoyed reading that.

This was AMAZING!!

It's one of those stories where you can read it and not have to think about everything that's happening all the time. It's easy to read, FUNNY, and the characters come through amazingly. (Yes, I know I just used that word XP)

I can't wait for the sequel!!

P.S. I didn't review before (even though I despiratly wanted to) because if the story's finished I usually review at the last chapter.

Awesome story, really!

(I'm liking the Journal Format a lot better now than I did before)

Loving Your Story,

Kell ^.^

Whee! That was fun. I finally read something that has an ending. I always seem to pick stories that die halfway through, leaving me dying with it.

I've been reading this story all night, and I just had to let you know that it's fabulous. I love stories styled this way (toyed with one myself before ultimately ditching it). There was this one book, Tale of Two Summers, it was really awesome. It was told in a form much like this. Once of my favorites.

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know I LOL'd at the part where Lance says, what, you want me to go around whispering "Anthony Ledwater" in people's ears. Heheh. Also, this is a damn good story and I love Lance. And Anthony, but I like Lance better. :D

Wooahh I totally wasn't expecting the Lance is Talon twist!
I loved this story; the ideas of them writing everything down was good ^__^
I especially liked the ending where Wilfred...sory, Kyle, got totally owned.
:]

ah. its so cute. i love the names youve chosen and the letters and its so adorable. i love letters ~ and i love how anthony has a purple streak in his haiir. and his gorgeous fashion~ and his chains~ and they are just the cutest couple ever.

Hah! oh god, where to start?

First off, I don't normally read stories written in this format, but the summary just sort of drew me in. And I couldn't stop after that. It was just so funny and cute at the same time. And you were actually able to develop characters through letters. Likable characters.

*sigh* I'm a sucker for those stories with the whiney, bitchy guy with an attitude problem (Anthony). It just makes things a lot more fun to read.

And god, did I get mad at first when Anthony started writing about Talon. I was just like 'NO! It's supposed to be Lance! NOO!' but then I just gasped at that little lance being talon twist.

*another sigh* good read. entertaining, thats for sure.

sometimes its kinda gets confusing but its so damn good~~..so..hurm..where is the sequel?..cant seem to find it~~?...

Oh my god!

I holy freaking love this story!