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| hoowdoideletethisaccount 2005-09-26 ch 1, | abuseHehe, this was witty, amusing, and reflective. I liked the final two lines: they were cool, unexpected, a defiantand humourous close to the scenario you depict. |
| Aimee Raven 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuse*gulp* your poetry makes me shiver...your vocabulary is frigging incredible! I know all these words but they never come to me when I'm writing, and they make your poetry so powerful! And usually I find poetry without rhyme rather mediocre, but yours is just brilliant! Love, Mia |
| tablesalt 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved the way you concluded the poem. Sharp, short and snappy. |
| Ohmm 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseThe classy language and tone fits the whole subject matter of this very well; you have managed to bring out the characterization of the persona quite indirectly. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI love that last stanza, such confidence and relief and the "curiously satisfying" Splendid. |