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hoowdoideletethisaccount
2005-09-26
ch 1,
abuseHehe, this was witty, amusing, and reflective. I liked the final two lines: they were cool, unexpected, a defiantand humourous close to the scenario you depict.
Aimee Raven
2005-08-03
ch 1,
abuse*gulp* your poetry makes me shiver...your vocabulary is frigging incredible! I know all these words but they never come to me when I'm writing, and they make your poetry so powerful! And usually I find poetry without rhyme rather mediocre, but yours is just brilliant! Love, Mia
tablesalt
2005-08-03
ch 1,
abuseLoved the way you concluded the poem. Sharp, short and snappy.
Ohmm
2005-08-02
ch 1,
abuseThe classy language and tone fits the whole subject matter of this very well; you have managed to bring out the characterization of the persona quite indirectly.
Nobody-n-Particular
2005-08-01
ch 1,
abuseI love that last stanza, such confidence and relief and the "curiously satisfying" Splendid.
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