Reviews for Average Beautiful

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Tohru Daihikashousha 2008-03-12 ch 1,	abuseIs this going to be continued anytime? Or are you gone forever? I know some people that have updated after literally years, so I was just curious.
paputsza 2008-01-01 ch 1,	abusethis gives me warm and fuzzy feelings. I couldn't really type "this gives me waff" because that sounds like a disease or something, but i've definitely got it. O.O i doubt you'll wake up, but if you do could you update this
Andie 2007-11-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou're right Nathan's pov flowed better...but Taylor's wasn't bad either...just a little awkward in the beginning. I like your variety of characters throughout your stories. It's great that for once a character was not gorgeous but just average, so that one can relate to the character better. Plz don't stop writing, g/l with your stuff!
Nae-chan 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuseOMG! You toatlly have to update this. It's amazing!
Kamiko-Miha 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseNathan seems sweet. They feel like me in a way. I don't feel close to the people I hang ot with, they're just people I know. Thank you for posting this, it's a good story ^^
whyme300 2006-07-02 ch 1,	abuseI like Taylor's point of view!! I think it's cute how he teases Nathan and how Taylor gadges his reactions!! I think you should really stick with this one...XD
Alyhs 2006-05-22 ch 1,	abuseWhat a good story! So far I love it! Keep up the great work and don't get discourage. I look forward to reading some more.
Finwe 2006-04-09 ch 1,	abuseI like your first person experiment, i think it's one of your better pieces. I also like Taylor's POV as well. Honestly, i think they're both good. I wish you had more written for this (as well as some of your other stories hint hint ;). I'm sorry you've decided not to write anymore here. I think your writing has really improved throughout your pieces, although the endings to most of them need redone. It just doesn't feel like you spent enuf time on them. Right when you were getting into the climax of a story, you'd rush it, and two chapters later it was done. Don't get me wrong, I do like your writing, just think it needs a little improvement. I really do hope you decide to come back and finish some of these writings. (Maybe start some more?...hehe) Well, take care. --Finwe =^.^=
Shadow 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon.	abusePweesh update this too? YOU MUST KEEP WRITING! do leave all of your fans waiting.. ^^ -Shadow
JPhinala 2006-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like this. You should work on it if you get time. I can really connect with Nathan. (Except I know that I'm gay. :) ) One more step on the way to reading the entire Izzy-Chan collection! -James
Jaque Dark 2006-02-14 ch 1,	abusePlease tell me that there's going to be more of this! Please! I hate accidentally stumbling onto really good stories that aren't complete! JD
Don't have an account here ... 2006-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay, this is pretty well written, and the fact that Nathan isn't your average "bishonen" is interesting. I rather like it for the most part. However, this could be so much better than it is right now. Details, details, details! I feel I hardly know where they are half the time and it all seems to pass by so quickly. You should slow down and elaborate-- The extra effort will be awarded, I assure you and will help the story be more real and entertaining. As of right now I can't help but feel your story feels a little shallow. A story needs more than just main characters. You've got to have environments and others to back them up as well or it seems like they're the only things that exist. Also, there were a few times when the perspective changed from first person to third and started leaving me confused. It's always good to read over your story, or have someone else read it to see what you might've mixed up. Just something to look out for. Finally the spelling and grammar also needs to be fixed a bit. You can use spell-check or something to fix that, but most of the mistakes were ignorable. Now, I don't mean to sound mean when commenting on this, but seeing as all your reviews (at least the ones I've glanced over) didn't contain any critique I thought maybe I should write something. I really do enjoy this story and hope that you continue it, but remember that you can always improve on this! So... Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Continue! ^^
BR 2005-12-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseBah, Nathan makes me want to go 'aww' he is cute. ^_^
Serialcode A 2005-11-22 ch 1,	abuseMy heart is melting. Oh the sweetness. Oh.
The Vampyre Armand 2005-11-04 ch 1,	abuseOMG... i really really REALLY like this story! it's so so soo sweet... and teddy bear guys are sweet... well i guess i say this because im gay... well er... love your story and hope there is another chapter... i think im Taylor... artsy yet sweet... well yeah love your story and hope you write more...

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