Holy cow. This was amazing! It's slightly abstract, but I loved it so much! I like how you bolded, italized, and underlined certain sections! Wonderful piece, keep it up!

Whoa, that was dark. but really good. I enjoyed it, darkness and all. I absoloutely adored the line "Let’s leave you now, your crimson rain on the ground". Amazing. Loved it. Favourites for this story!