A bitter poem about nature, I think... That the beauty is only a mask of something ugly beneath it. Another awesome poem, good job.

If any of my interpretations are so completely wrong it's annoying, then e-mail me... Sometimes I'm really bad at that, lol. ^^; Look forward to more poems!

~Leeona Trance

I love the imagery and play on words.

Hehehe...goldfish are weird...

Wow, this sounds so familiar. I wonder why. -.-;

As usual, awesome ryhming... I'm not quite sure what the spring water is about, but hey, your poem. n.n