I think all your work is excellent. As a therapist, it is hard for me to do any literary critique but I will note you are very expressive and I would love to continue to be allowed access to your feelings and thoughts so we can process them during sessions. You are very talented and tackle some very profound issues.

this poem seriously inspired me and made me cry inside cuz its so true. our problems can corrupt us so much we can't see the way out. this poem has made my day, thank you.-anime freakizoid X^_^X

Wow...that's deep man...deep...my limited vocabulary does not know how to express the intensity and excellence of this brillianty elaborated poem...