Wow. I love your poetry... So much. These two poems contained such feelings to them... Nervousness, confusion, expectance, and the hurt, the ultimate blow, and the burning sadness at the end of it all.

I've made up my mind. I'm putting you on my alert and fave list. XD

Hm. I liked that. So tragic. ;_; Poor guy.

Oh...poor boy. You are an excellent poet, you know.

Loved it, very amusing!

wow - very deep and moving. powerful work!

nice expressions and sidenotes to make me feel more in the main character