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| miss-blackhair 2005-10-06 ch 6,  | abusevery cool.. =) update soon |
| FallenRose2517 2005-10-01 ch 6, | abuseInteresting Tenzin. Teehee that made me laugh though. It sorta sounds like Krissy and me. Sry i know it wasn't suposed to be funny, but it was high-larious. Hey i thought u had given up on this story. I'm glad u didn't, cause its really good. TTml or else. |
| wheream_I 2005-09-30 ch 6, anon. | abusegood story...how do u not knoe what to rite |
| caramel blazers 2005-08-21 ch 5, | abusemad story... maybe you should let Mina's secret ( about her dad) being found out or something like that. |
| purpleflo 2005-08-17 ch 5, | abuseHey umm about the idea..i think i have some..not sure if there any good but oh well ill tell u anyways...hmm...maybe her dad should like get a gurl friend and like she trys to take over and hits her too, she could like have kids and her dads all nice to them but hates her, and about the whole kissing thing what if like steven never talks her again and then Jaden really likes mina but steven finds out about him cutting and threatens to tell everyone if he doesnt leave mina alone..well thats all thats coming to me lol..but yea FallenRose2517 is right its ur story so surprise us lol hope i helped later |
| FallenRose2517 2005-08-16 ch 5, | abuseHello! Get on with the story i gave u a bunch of ideas. Remember u don't always have to write for ur reviewers. U have to write for yourself. |
| purpleflo 2005-08-11 ch 4, | abuselol it keeps getting better |
| rewind regrets 2005-08-10 ch 4, | abusegreat chappy! again greed gets to me so more more more plzz with a cherry on top! |
| dyingofluv 2005-08-08 ch 4, | abuseHehehe, yay! okay... more?! more?! I love it... Keep it up...till the end! muahahaah! Luv it! That was kinda harsh about the ** thing..but hey... I love it still! |
| FallenRose2517 2005-08-08 ch 4, | abuseI luved it Tenz! It was awesome and i loved the last sentence cause it was perfect. I think u should put her 2gether with Jaden cause he seems to understand more and can help her. TTyl sis. |
| ElectricalRainStorm 2005-08-08 ch 4, | abuseWow... Methinks that's a very good story. Keep going on it! |
| Viet Pryde 2005-08-08 ch 4, | abusetenny zinny! i meant who's who, as in who is who in the real world (u know u, me, andrew, lmao) keep up the writing, and send it to me to edit it!) ~impy |
| dyingofluv 2005-08-04 ch 3, | abuseHey! Whata kind! where's da otha chappies...*pounces on author* muahahahaha, I demand another chapter! MOWE MOWE MOWE! heheheeh, I luv it...great job... I know another story.. bwahahaha, anyways...hurry up... I luv it so much, Im pressuring you to update more/hahahah |
| blondiechick411 2005-08-04 ch 3, | abuseI love it, but I didn't understand the open window part. Do you think you can explain it in the next chapter or something? Anyway, this is really good. |
| purpleflo 2005-08-04 ch 3, | abuseloved it...cant wait for the next one lol |