|Reviews for Pathetic|
| sarani-silver 8/2/05 . chapter 1
i'm guna assume u weren't going for the feel good typ of poem but it was still good just reather sad
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/2/05 . chapter 1
"As if..." conveys such an uncertainty, a theme prevalent in many of your poems. You are often intensely self-critical and rarely satisfied, or at least that is so in the poems and the speaker.