Pretty good chapter, though really short. And I'm also kind of lost. what's happening? has she been kidnapped or something. sorry, i just forget easily. meh, but if you could explain a little, it would be helpful. Hope you update soon!

well prosed. expecting nothing less on the next post. ^^ and happy new year!

kakyou

maybe you should write longer chapters... but anyway.. great...!

HAHA.. gay...-.-

... interesting summary... it sorta remided me of Shinomori Aoshi from Rurouni Kenshin

Hrm... Interesting... However, use more description please (like I'm one to talk, pfft). Dialog-only sukinai desu ^^;

Interesting... I don't know what to think of the plot, but it's quite well written.

Great chapter! Yay! It was pretty good so...update soon! Wait, have you told us what the girl's name is cause I forgot? EH, ok, update! Yay!

Hee, hee! Funny chapter! Y'know, that would be something to do! I wonder what it would be like. hmm, anyhoo, update soon!

Hey, this was pretty good! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon! :)

It's a good story! I am hooked already and I love the form you wrote it in! Update soon!