Wow, it's been quite a while since you've updated... well, it certainly seems as though there will not be another update happening anytime soon or maybe at all but I like this story, and I will put it on Story Alert just in case! I really like your characters.

No!

Why oh why has this story been abandoned?!?!?!
*cries*


please please please oh pretty pretty please (if it helps, although I know it doesn't, today is my birthday... and I'm all alone *cries again* so reading this story and knowing you'll come back to it will give me hope!)

And that was our drama session for the day! But please try to finish this! AWESOMENESS on a stick! Why a stick? I don't quite know...

I'm dying to know what happens next! Then again if Spencer's the one to pick me up, then it just might happen ;]

But seriously, please consider updating! I'll patiently wait for the next chapter~ (and undone too)

AHSM is a really good story so far. Really nice characters in it. Let me guess Ryder and Spencer are going to become a couple? That is if you continue the story. Say ya'll continue the story. I'll be keeping my eyes out for more of AHSM. Can't wait to see who offed Ryder by summoning a demon to devour him.

I hope you're going to update soon or even continue the story, it is very good. It pulls you in as you read so that you want to know what will happen. Very original too.

I like it! A lot! Especially the way you integrate the details of the way death works into the story instead of having a whole paragraph just explaining it. I also like the interactions between Ryder and Spencer. Looking forward to an update!

just read your story and now I want to throw myself into the dust that your feet stand upon and say: please...in the name of all nei gaiman fans, give me another chapter...
I know it's a lot to ask for, but I really, truely loved this story, the characters, the style and therefore I want to beg you and offer you all my belongings including chocolatebisquits, if you just keep on writing this...

This is kind of cute, in the morbid kind of way. Are you planning on finishing becuase I have to say it seems to be a wonderful story.

Hope you do plan on continuing.

Dark

Oh my this is really a great story!

Okay, so i usually don't review before finishing all available chapters... but...!
First of all, I'm loving this so far! It's intriguing and just leaves you questioning and questioning... and i'm addicted to murder scenes, thus it's totally my thing xD;

Second! Reading loads of crime novels gives me the suspicion that Ryder is searching for a murder in the wrong lane. Being a Loner strikes all possibilities besides... parents. Close family. Heheh... i'm usually wrong but guessing is fun xD;

Now, off to the next! (evil laugh)

Ryder is such a loveable wuss. Excellent premise, and great background with Spencer's troubles with Fate.

Livi

please update soon! this story is really good! very original.

-Precious

oh, indeed XD i cant wait for more.

Oh. My. GOD.

*sobs in agony*

Please never, ever abandon this story! Your characters are so vivid and developed it feels like we've known them forever. The plot's positively ingenious!

Dude, seriously. Have I told you how much I love you!? Your stories are like freakin awesome, I don't even no where to begin with my comments. Well, I'll start with characters. Love them, they way they act doesn't change and your writting flows together very nicely. Almost to great to be put into words, really, i'm not kidding. I totally love Everything and hope to see more things by you soon and updates!