this also would make a great song. well written, good job!

That's so sweet, I love the 'do you?' at the end..I love it!

Much love, Rosanna.

Good poem. I like the last line, it gives sort of an ending question, sort of like an edge of the cliff thing.

Lovely work Hidden. And it is good to be back. Feel free to send me that sound byte, I'd like to hear it ^_^.

I'd give this to someone I loved if I wasn't so angry and hurting because of him.

I love this HiddenFlame. It's beautiful and saddening, but well written. Nice job!

This was awesome and i can relate to this right now...i wish i could say those words 2 the one i really care for who hates me right now...but thankyou for writing this, it somehow gave me hope^_^

Very nice I really liked these lines

VerI’d give up anythin’ for youJust say the word and I’ll throw it all awayJust for a chance to be with youA chance to keep on growin’ old with you

"You" Must be some inspiration! Good poem, keep it up!

I loved the ending. Very poetic and a very nice piece. Well done. QueenVixta

o cool i'll like to hear the tune XD

cute poem!! That's exactly the way I feel now with my boy, I'm so happy with him!! :) anyway I want to hear the tune liefie! :)

Beautiful. I feel the same for my love. Wow. Thanks for the complimentary cookie! *steals box* Muhahah you cant catch me! *flees*

this was amazing...and i would love to hear the tune for it...one of the best songs i've read in a long time, i could totally see myself singing along to this on the radio, lol...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Aw, this sounds like a song, too!You have a DA account? I want to see!Mine's shades-of-ink.

Wow..hun, this is amazing. I absolutely love it. So romantic and sweet :). Great job. I love you. *muah*