It's beautiful. Skimming just on the edge of the meaning, the message is crystal clear.

the world's not black and white, there always is a maybe...

EB

YOURPOERTRYISTRULYAMAZINGANDILOVEITANDYOUNEEDTOWRITEMORE!

... sorry about that. I don't know what came over me. (YESIDOIWASAWESTRUCKBYTHEAMAZINGPOETRY!)

I think that this poem is beautiful. The last few lines [Maybe I can’t move // Because I’ll do something drastic // I don’t want to say it // But you move my lips]...the "you move my lips" part especially is achingly amazing and brilliant. You definitely should keep posting your poetry. It's as wonderful as your stories are. :-)

this was really good - i like the way you rounded it off with the "I don't want to say it/but you move my lips" i thought that just rounded it off. the way you describe everything, it just flows nicely, i really liked "They don't see the world/in each other's eyes" this was really nicely done honey keep it up!

luv ya muchly

emerald ravenx x x

ill admit its confusing but it makes sense, and after i read it, i felt like i understood every word... wonderful job