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| Qryous 2008-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseIt's beautiful. Skimming just on the edge of the meaning, the message is crystal clear. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abusethe world's not black and white, there always is a maybe... EB |
| Tatsu, the Blade Star 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseYOURPOERTRYISTRULYAMAZINGANDILOVEITANDYOUNEEDTOWRITEMORE! ... sorry about that. I don't know what came over me. (YESIDOIWASAWESTRUCKBYTHEAMAZINGPOETRY!) |
| Jeoal 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseI think that this poem is beautiful. The last few lines [Maybe I can’t move // Because I’ll do something drastic // I don’t want to say it // But you move my lips]...the "you move my lips" part especially is achingly amazing and brilliant. You definitely should keep posting your poetry. It's as wonderful as your stories are. :-) |
| emerald raven 2005-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was really good - i like the way you rounded it off with the "I don't want to say it/but you move my lips" i thought that just rounded it off. the way you describe everything, it just flows nicely, i really liked "They don't see the world/in each other's eyes" this was really nicely done honey keep it up! luv ya muchly emerald ravenx x x |
| Apathetically Angelic 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseill admit its confusing but it makes sense, and after i read it, i felt like i understood every word... wonderful job |