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| For What Its Worth 2006-02-08 ch 24, | abusethat was cool. is the prince another dragon rider?Addie and yaley of lightkalif and edro of fireralier and nyowan of watercode and ?the prince and dragon of air? and addie kidnapped by ...Daylor? verynice |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 7, | abusefreaky. bye, gotta read |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 6, | abuseall the tales, all the stories if only one would believe,instead of sifting as though through a sieve,a magical world would awaitthe only limits of whichis the blessed imagination,that so many ditch. i really likedit. despite the typos. ;) |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 5, | abuseslkfskhjfklsgksghhghh. nore content!1 lol. its driving me crazy. but verynicely done. |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 4, | abusea very wise older brother. very rapid change of scebnery. Again, way not enough materiel in each chapter. half the time i spend on this story is clicking next page. |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 3, | abuseis it the same nest as the one the prince died in? and not all girls are blond! your chapters need to have more materiel in them, as well. all in all, not bad at all. |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 2, | abusedraws you in more, and leaves you guessing yet again. i am really intrigued now. whats up with the dreams? (visions of events yet to pass?) if you will excuse me, i really want to get back to the rest of the story now, lol |
| For What Its Worth 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abusenice prologue...draws you in while telling little. i think ill search for all ofyour stories. very nicely done. |
| Teffie 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI don't have time to read all 20 (wow...O.O) chapters yet, but I'll say that this first one is pretty good. However, at one part you mentioned that the men who had been horseback riding were panting. I don't think they would be out of breath when their horses had been doing all the work. But, then again, I don't know anything about horseback riding. :) Anyway, keep it up! |