 XxParalaixX 2006-02-04 . chapter 1ha. that's funny... and sadly kind of true in an exxagerated sort of way. :) great work. |
 sarah1491 2006-01-30 . chapter 1I love it! I like the humour, and also the fact that it is so true. I mean, I feel the same way! (Except instead of Spanish I have French because I'm in Canada. French is okay..) Okay, sorry about my long reviews! I'm going to go read the rest of your poems now! I am SO adding you to my faves list! |
 Master Bates 2005-12-15 . chapter 1Good Poem. Going on the favorites list! |
 Jeremy Kerley 2005-10-05 . chapter 1Hola! Como te llamas? Loved the poem! |
 Leader of the Mushroom Militia 2005-08-19 . chapter 1*laughs* Hey ou did the imagery realleh good ^^ The feelings of boredom and so on are expressed well... I like it!
One thing to comment on, the first two stanzas were ok, but it got a lot better. It was cool. |
 Twilit Exaggerance 2005-08-10 . chapter 1Hm. A curious piece. Nice enjambment, the ending disappointed me somehow, I felt it was somewhat out of place. Otherwise, well wrote! |
 hellochello 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Haha. Nice. I know you exaggerated but I share some opinions there. Really great. And yea, it would have been really confusing without the italics. It would have felt like you jumped around and then I'd get lost. :D -Chelly |
 L.Feldman 2005-08-04 . chapter 1WOW! I LOVED this poem!! So funny, it really put a smile on my face! Nice decision about keeping the italicised words; it really gave it more mmph! I especially liked the part about math! Anyways, keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to reading your next piece! |
 Akip 2005-08-03 . chapter 1I really liked this poem, especially the part about math. It was a good choice the keep the italicized words. Keep up the good work! |
 Aryanda 2005-08-03 . chapter 1haha. this made me laugh. it's exactly how i feel in some of my subjects... this was a fun little poem, great job! |
 Just A Note In The Wind 2005-08-02 . chapter 1I love this! It truely describes every aspect of school and how you feel when you have to go back to it after summer! The rhyming gives it a good silly feeling, which makes it a funny little poem! |