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| Sumire Cherise 2005-08-31 ch 2,  | abuseAw! I like this one! Akira-chan is such a little liar! But he seems so cute! And Jun's mom is so nice, unlike her son! |
| Triley 2005-08-31 ch 2, | abuseAw Jun is so sweet now! I'm SO glad he changed his mind, and is letting Akira stay for *coughs* ONE night... *laughs* Let's just see how long Jun keeps that promise! Tom |
| FeatherJunkie 2005-08-06 ch 1, | abuseIt's so cute! Akira is adorable. Yay for him for following Jun home; I can't wait to see Jun's reaction. The (Oh. Gy. Meakin’. Frod.) thing was funny. ^.^ I oughta quote that sometime. Please do update. |
| Kazura (Kaz) Ojuwara 2005-08-03 ch 1, | abuseAAWW! KAWAII!! please keep writing, please, please, please? Its totally rightcheos!! I'm pretty new here, so I'm going around and revewin and stuff. I just transferred from fanfiction. If you could r&r my story, plz? Its a yaoi. I'm trying. nyanya! Well, thanx a WHOLE bunch and keep writing! Ja ne~~Kaz~ |
| Triley 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseI like the story so far, looks like it will be a good comedy, like you've got it classified as (partially). So far it seems like it'll be a good story for you to write, seems like it'll mix the best of your writing skills into something laughable. --Your rabid fanboy, Tom |
| Becks-007 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute and funny, I can't wait for more! |