Woah, that's a dark way to look at a city, but it is true in the darker parts.I like the 'feathered boas/ women made to look like toys/ a doll's soul'very kool

You have to love the haiku. An excellent piece.

wow... just... wow!

this is alright i like it fiairly enough keep it up:)

that's awesome. I love these types of poems where they make sense in a very absrtact sort of way. Ever read White Oleander? there's a really good one of these in there. that's a great book. depressing but great. I like

Not bad at all, but not really haiku. 5.7.5...

Wow, this is cool! I got a lot of interesting images from that.