Hiya, nI like the story so far. I was a little disappointed that the chapter was so short. The description of the story was very good. Hopefully the next chapter will be longer though. Another tip would to be to allow anonymous reviews. Who knows how much people have been trying to review this story? You wouldn't even know.;-D So keep up the good work. Ill keep checkin in to see if you have updated! Catstar14
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