Wowza... i didn't realise the sort of poetry you write nat, And i'm sitting here reading this right after your Tyrone Belling update... considering you've been HASSLING me to read it.. gawd I love Pierre - he's soo cool. When do i get to see the chained-to-the-table part?? I'm hanging out for it.. though, i suppose I'm lucky because i know all your plots before you even write them... :D *ding*

Newho.. gotta go.. keep with the writing.

P.S Are you entering that writing competition??

Great word chioce in this. Its always refreshing to read something new or weith a bit of flare. Anyway, thanks for the fav. I love how the lines clash. I can relate to this and i envokes a lot of thought in me.

ANNA

hmm.. well thought out with an interesting flow of emotions. pretty cool =P i really like the line "Disregard those who marred me with so much good grace." and thanks for the reveiw by the way. i'd give you constructive criticism too, but i'm really no good at that. the only thing i could point out is that in the first line "a" should be "an."

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.