 les petits bateaux 2006-10-08 . chapter 1love the imagery. |
 Noir Fleurir 2005-11-01 . chapter 1this is good i like it :-) |
 Trilock 2005-08-11 . chapter 1Reptiles and haikus--haven't seen that before. Good one. |
 Need 'n' Know 2005-08-07 . chapter 1I can never write haikus...
Constrictor... I get it.
Julia. |
 liz anya 2005-08-04 . chapter 1Hmm, reminds me of Harry Potter. |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-03 . chapter 1I love the description of the gaze. Really nice. |