 Hershey249 2005-08-03 . chapter 1Oh, very cool. I love how the rhyming skips around, it gives this sense of continued movement that really goes well with the theme here. Something personal, maybe? I'm interpreting this in my own way, maybe something about the simpler, higher things in life, but I see a few different things this could be about. That's great though, multiple interpretations are a component of good poetry. :)
I also just wanted to say that I love how this started out, you do nifty things with wordplay, like the dual use of "morning." Very nice. |