Wowzers, a fave most deff :]

see...now i'm so much convinced that you get a publisher...lol...it was pretty intense...lol..made me sweat..lol...a bit vulgar for me to handle...you see i'm a conservative 17 year old girl...but oh dear I learned a lot of stuff...lol...thanks a lot...

but i'm not liking this story just because of its intensity or rawness...but because of your style of writing...Lady, you got some gift!..lol...Good luck!

pls do add more stories...lol

eh.

Wow...that was raw! And very fantasy like. Mythical.

I'm not some sort of saddistic ssex fiend or anything, but that was intense, and your description was great. I could really see everything happening, which was a bit disturbing at times, but I think that that was your objective. Also really wonderful character description, I could really see where they were coming from.

that was good

I love your story. It's hot LoL

Wow. That was...intense. It was very good! My favorite of yours so far.

Pandemica

excellent!