I am Intrigued. Wow this is very well written. YOu have a very realistic and in the moment writing style. Thsi is just awesome. I hope you update soon.

I love it. Very descriptive without causing a loss of interest. You're a good writer, I can't wait to read more.

I can relate to a lot of that.M, waking up to yesterday's schoolwork.

Sure, if you could call the collision of random archetypes plotting the death of each other a family.

brilliant.

I always love the way school bells sound. They remind me of closure. Something final. Making up your mind. All the things I can’t accomplish.

genius.

any more words from me would just water down the meaning of the review; to praise a truly exceptional piece of writing. i hope to see this story expanded upon, it's a wonderful start.

p.s. i'm adding you to my 'favorite authors' list.

You have a great way of writing...This looks interesting. Update soon please!

i really do love the ending. 'click' just says it all!

very abstract and oh-so obscure in many ways, but i love that.

This was well written. The descriptions and characters, even if only mentioned briefly, were wonderful. I love the abstract tone and how you describe Josh's death as well.

Click.

I love it.