Not bad, i liked it!

~ Neteri Bennu

awesome. real pretty, too. now, i absolutely love your poems. youre going on my favorite authors list, and my alert list. -smiley faces all 'round!-

keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:-

aw ...its a sweet happy poem!

i likie!!

-Entropy

Wow...short, but powerful, and unlike most poems about relationships on this site that are all angsty, this one was actually uplifting. Excellent job.

-StraightJacketPhil

Deep, and well-detailed. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.