Viscereal (chk sp.) Favorite lines:

"Renewed but deepened lashes,
Shall be painted on their shames."

Deep well writing. Love it.

I liked that. Morbid and dark, but it flowed easily and, after all, dark poems are after my own heart. I think this might be a great hard rock/heavy metal song.

A nitpick: You mispelled "Pharaohs" in the third line.

And thanks for the review. :)

The Four Horsemen Of The Apocalypse.

War, pestilence, famine, and... oh god... what's the last one? Duh. Death. Geez. I really need to brush up on my mythology. I couldn't even remember Death of the four horsemen.

Great poem. I love mythology. It's so incredible. It just makes me feel so knowledgable to be pulling all these old facts just out of my head.

You, my friend, are my hero.

~Stormy