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| in tesseraction 2005-10-22 ch 1, | DAMN this is awesome! |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-09-02 ch 1, | Your poems are like a six sided box- I know that doesn't make sense, but stay with here. Its like, you present each side in each verse, and by the end every layer is completly in place. Juliet. |
| QueenVixta 2005-08-03 ch 1, | I like this, another very clever piece it feels like there is a deeper meaning to it. I have to confess to being a Starbucks fan, I'm english - that's my excuse!! Queenvixta |
| Lucid Nonsense 2005-08-03 ch 1, | Simple but eloquent, I like it |
| White Tea and Ginger 2005-08-03 ch 1, | Hm. Not quite sure if this is really about coffee. I think you're lying, lol ;).It sounds like it's about a lover to me. Anyway. Beautifully written. If you can write this way about coffee, then I'm sure the rest of your work is amazing. I'll be checking it out ;)!*Hillary* |
| smile persephone 2005-08-03 ch 1, | Simply displayed and lovely through and through. I adore the imagery and the emotions as well. Wonderfully written! |
| citrus scented 2005-08-03 ch 1, | wicked. bitter and intresting to read- thought provoking. |