u said soujiro in one line. u read or watch hana yori dango?

Thank for writing that story, I really enoyed it!

Great Story. I wish it was longer did not want it to end.

Um...you've had some spelling and grammar mistakes throughout this whole story, I was able to overlook them but WHO the heck is Soujirou?!

this story was really good. i enjoyed it muey mucho!

I love this story so much. Aw, there should like be a sequel or something for when the baby comes. Man, this was so cool since it's like even with her having issues and his own issues they worked it out. I hate too many stories where the people are like so unrealistic and the flaws are like the basics with body and all of that. Anywhos, I loved it and thanks for writing it. :D

Simon is cute. Haha. I know he's fictional, but he seems like he's a total hottie. Lol. Great story. :)

as soon as he asked what was david last name i knew it was his friend. nice twist!

I like your stories...this one was good. iliked how you incorporated today's issues, and still had an happy ending. Good job and keep writing. i like reading interracial romance stories involving black women and white men, mostly because I am married to a white man, and I can relate.

Ah I LOVE it. It's perfect. Absolute PERFECTION. OMG. I LOVE IT. SO MUCH. And the ending is PERFECT. Just what I expected for them! AH. I can't believe it's over! OMG. I LOVE it. -stanind ovation- BRAVO. This was just amazing. I laughed, cried, stayed on the edge of my seat the whole time, and just... loved every minute of it. This is was amazing. Omg. I'm SO happy with the ending. I can't even tell you.

ACK. He's SO gross. AH. After all that being sweet and patient and not scaring her during the photo shoot... ACK. CAMERA?! That reminds me of this israeli movie, HaCochavim Shel Shlomi (or, bonjour misour shlomi, the english title) where this girl is married and has twins and they're really hard to take care of so she never has sex with her husband. But when he looks at ** to satisfy himself, she gets furious. Only then he puts ** of THEM on the internet. It's really funny. But yeah so it reminds me of that. ECK. YUCK. He's a perv. LEAVE HIM MINA! JUST RUN AWAY!

Aww. Sad. I'm understanding the title more and more now. It's really good. Sad but good. It's moving quickly though, them falling in love. Oh well. I still love it. And her life is SO sad. Ahh... I'm going to cry or something... I hope nothing else happens to her. But Simon DEFINATELY is going to be there for her, it seems. Aw. He's sweet. Even if he IS a perv... And I love the part about fixing his writing. Too cute and funny.

Hey. I read a couple of your other stories and I like what you've written. Cool chapter.

Go Jamaica! I'm half Jamaican. We rock! And I was born in England too.

**. They do make *everything*! I have some ** bedsheets. It was a struggle not to burst out laughing when my mum gave them to me, and ask her what kind of girl she thought I was. lol

Much love,

Aero

Ah! I HATE David. Now he's giving her nightmares?! THis is so sad. I have to go to sleep now, but I'll read more later. I love this. It's so sad but it's really good. I love how they fell asleep like that. That's SO cute. I'm dying to know what happens next.

OMG. That is the saddest thing I've ever heard of! Omg. And then Simon just beat up David like that... I love this story and how fast it's moving, but I think maybe it's moving a little too fast. I don't know... I guess that's how oyu intended it, though. I really love it. I'm like addicted.