|Reviews for A Time Tangled Serenade to See You Through Winter|
| eighteen hundred 8/3/05 . chapter 1
This was alright, especially towards the end. Something that bothered me about the first two stanzas in particular was your usage of the same word multiple times in only two or three lines. You could come up with different ways of saying the same thing. I also thought that, in the first stanza particularly, the individual lines were a bit long-winded.