crude. beautiful.

"sweatsticky summers"

Great phrase, loved it. It was sexy, just the right amount of vulgar, and not cliche.

it was gorgeous.

like she doesn't care what he does to her - she shouldn't anyway.

I love the end, seems like every on the wild side couple.

Oh my I completely love this one... I can relate and four letter words speak much truth.

This is amazingly written. i really love it.

you always said love was the 'half-glass-full'

way of saying lust, but i say it's just a

way of saying fuck (passionately).

oh, that was perfect. finished the poem beautifully. i have... literally no criticism :P xx

i am in love with this poem. it's so gritty and seductive. if this poem was a person, i would be helplessly captivated. it sounds & tastes & smells like pure(ly tainted) summer.

this is such a sexy poem made even better by the little snatches of humour or irony. I'm just taken with the ideas within it, because I think it's so full of life.

Wow, just got to love the power of this poem. Must be the best last line... well in a very long time.

Holy shit. I love the last four lines.

for some reason this made me laugh... the ending i mean... it was rather amusing...

Great poem and vivid descriptions. And I love the last part, such an interesting last thought. :)

Another great piece. I love this and so relate..this is going onto my favorites list. Great job. I especially love the first six sentences and last four, too.

Good, positive but almost saddening ending. Brilliant poem.