Shades of Angel the Vampire Muppet...

Very descriptive, I was particularly caught by um, Paragraph 5, 'But the horror wouldn't stop...' what great writing. Keep it up.

damn... this is really really good. i dunno if its going to be longer, but i'll read it. I'm also gonna tell my friends about this. Its very well worded, and everything that's been said makes me loathe this fictional character, and pray that he never becomes reality. Thank you for writing this, its really good.