Wow, that was so pretty. No, really I liked it. It flowed really nicely too.

Heya, nice poem is all reads kinda dreamily. A bit sad at the end though. I like how you state things like: "Ocean, turned into male" I noticed a few spelling errors like 'walm' not 'warm' and 'rythm' not 'rhythm.' Great poem. Very vivid.

beautiful imagery, i love "envelopped by the foam of the sea". Great poem~evaa