:D THIS was really good, awesome. I love iit :D

hey, so i'm really liking your story so far :) kudos to you.

but...i think at the end when you said "I’m proud to say that the firs time I ever really punched a guy..." you forgot a 't' on 'first'.

so yeah..it's just one of my pet peeves when i spot some little error like that.

just thought you'd like to know.

keep up the good work :D

Hey there.

Well, I've read the entire story. It was awesome; I added it to my favorites and everything. But man, out of the entire story, I couldn't get one part out of my head. One part of the story in this chapter. When he pins her against the wall and, like, almost kisses her. Yeah, that part.

I don't know what about it that I like, but there's something that makes it my favorite part of the story. Like, yeah I know that it's him sexually scaring her and I wouldn't want anyone to be in that position with someone as scary (but awesome) as Jeremiah, but he's so cool. I look for stories where the boy is pierced and tattooed, but yours is awesome. There aren't that many of them, actually. Jeremiah is a cool name, too.

cheri du mien

very nice! I'm impressed that you pulled off the transformation of Jeremiah's character from evil bastard to loyal sweetie.

Well done nice long story :D

awesome story! i love jeremiah...and charlie...she is the best prep ever!
i love Jo and all the preps and the twins in the story...very nice.

ahh finally finished the story :] you did a nice job even though jeremiah's character came on a little strong at first. i enjoyed it a lot!

Wow. This story was AMAZING!

You did an excellent job with it, although I only read it now, when its like 2 years old xP

Anyways. Well done, I really enjoyed it.

I absolutely love this story. It was well written, with a few errors of leaving words, or adding a letter where it shouldn't be. Nothing major.

But, this story was captivating. I seriously stayed up all night reading it.

Good job. :)

I really like this story, its slightly cliche but its still good. Written really well - only a few grammar and spelling errors.

Nice job

very nice. :) i liked this story. cute. sweet
but bringing in jeremiahs brother wasn't neccessary i think, especially if he was only mentioned maybe once after he was introduced. :S
but very good anyway! ^^

OMG i love this story so much, you should write more like this! if you do, I'll love you forever!! J/k but realy, PLZ?!
-W.R.

i must commend you, this is an extremely well-written story. I do wish it could have been more romantic, but I can't say that what you've written isn't appropriate for the story.

I love the banters between Jo an Charlotte - reminds me of myself and my bf. lol.

damn it he is so warped

hey
this was such as awesome story!
hahaha thanks heaps =]

Hmm, this story wasn't at all what I expected it to bee. When I clicked on it, I was expecting a cheesy, cliched high school fic where the 'popular/good girl' falls for the 'outcast/bad boy'. As much as I love that particular cliche, I'm glad that wasn't the case. I loved that you used such common (and often disasterous) plot devices and made them original. Seriously, I didn't even roll my eyes when rape came up, and you used it three times. It was believable because your characters dealt with in a logical/human way, and it wasn't used to push the main characters together. In other words, your characters had depth, and that alone is worth the read.