Pretty good chapter! Hope you update soon!

P.S when u spell loose its lose. just to let ya know. :P~kitana5055

An interesting concept, mystery, and good writing - all of those factors reel in your readers to this story. However, I felt that the dream took up most of the chapter, making the introduction (in which the main character is awake) seem like a different story. Perhaps you should introduce the dream with the obvious but helpful: "I dreamt that I was ..." or have the character realize that she is dreaming. That's all. Have fun writing, and good luck.

Incredibly interesting story...creepy, mysterious, all that wonderful stuff. ^^

I did notice a couple of errors, so just be sure to re-read everything before submitting. Not that it's much to worry about. Just some minor typos.

Uh...I'd say my CC on this piece would be to insert a little more detail, action (even if it's just moving a little or coughing), or thoughts in between quotes while Danica and Falcon are talking. ^__^

Anyway, again, great story thus far. Falcon's pretty creepy. In a good sort of way. XD Hm...wonder what he wants Danica's blood for, eh...?

Spooky. What are they going to use her blood for, I wonder?

Really interesting story, anyway, update soon!