Wow. You say it came out of nowhere? This is amazing! I am really not an expert on love at this point in my life, and all my love poems are made up as well, but how do you do it? Yours are just so amazing and believable! I am starting to envy your talents. Haha. No, I don't like jealousy. :P Anyways, awesome job! :)

- Sarah

Another amazing poem!Good work! I liked this one alot. -Nods-

This is so pretty! Great job. Thanks for the review.

Wow... soft and gentle with beautiful imagery. This is an excellent poem and it made me smile and cheered me up, thinking back... I loved it. You're a truly talented writer!

This was beautiful, especially the lines "Wanting nothing but youAnd you wanting only me." Good job, and keep on writing!

I like this, the imagery is very good. Very nicely written. Great song. Thanks for reviewing. QueenVixta

its beautiful... I love the chorus and the repition of ending lines.. beautiful description of love

wow, i like the tenderness in this so very sweet

keep writing!

This is so beautiful! I could just imagine a melody along with the lyrics. It was a sweet, floaty song, and the wording flowed perfectly. Great job.

Beautiful song!

beautifully done. could feel the beat. nice job k/wshadowofyou

This was good as a song in that I didn't need the tune to appreciate the lyrical value. Not bad.