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Fairy in Black and White 8/15/05 . chapter 1Wow, very powerful. And the style is unique. Excellent poem. I love the rhyme and the way you go back and forth from inner thoughts to others' questions and comments. |
Kali Aja 8/6/05 . chapter 1Awesome poem, actually had some sort of rhyme scheme. Keep writing |