i dont feel like signing in...lol k

yup u did put a twist while i dont even knoe wut im writing...lol impy...put slightly more description!

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tenzy aka tenny zinny

*whistles* definitely a nice twist in there... i wansn't necessarily expecting that though... threw me off there you did! update soon and keep up the good work! I'm really curuious to hear what happened to alex after that too...

I don't really know where you're going with this story. I mean it is well written and you have fairly good grammar, but this new revelation does nothing to make Rocky more likeable. Now even the thought of him is so repugnant. And Alex isn't too high up on my list either being that he let Rocky, who is twice Lexie's size, beat her and Alex did nothing to stop Rocky. You need to get her a nice guy other than either of those two. Hope you update soon.

TTFN

ok so i am kinda confused and you defintly cant delete Everton Academy is not just for BOYS!!I love that story! ok but so i am still kinda confused email me!

. . . I really do like this but how could you make Rocky beat her up?!?!?!?!? That pretty much makes him unredeemable as a character in my book. The definition of Rocky is now bastard and that can't be changed. I'm mean you describe as being really big, and her being a little girl, and he punched her in he face and then thinks that he has a right to morally superior to her dad about the abuse? I don't think so! Well, I really do love it!

I really like this story and like you said it is kind of cliched but you have done it very nicely and it is rather well written, but I have one major complaint. Why do you have three people named things that are nicknames for Alexandra? It makes it really hard to keep everyone straight with Alex, Alexa and Lexie. I'm already confused. I honestly think you should change Alexa and Alex's names, but it's your story and up to you, but I have to say that I personally find it annoying, but everything that you have written so far is nice, and it's a really good first chapter, so I am reading on . . .

ALEX! damn...shes...**. lol mi bad. keep it up impy. EVERTON ACADAMEY!

I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!you better update soon. You need to update Everton Academy is not just for Boys! And hurry it up! lol Welsome to S&C Hotels is very intresting not one of your best I must say. Sorry for the tough love girl! But yeah great job update those two SOON!

I don't really understand this story. Why did Rocky beat Lexie when he confessed to loving her? It really doesn't make any sense. And also, where were the staff during the fight. In addition, Alexa just went to socceer practice when her friend just got beat up?

Dude, man, I don't care how sweet Rocky is. He HIT her. That is unexceptable. He better redeem himself quick...But way to throw me for a loop. Please update soon.

Aw, ...aw...great chapter! Poor Lexie.

*blinks* o ah keep up the amazing writing and update soon.. wow... that was honestly very unexpected... *nods*

i liked this chapter but you need to check typos a little better though

interesting impy. the stories getting good. n e way...i was wondering...im confused about mi story n what to rite next so can u give mi any ideas impy? well thanx. bye bye

I knew something was up with that Adam kid and his mom. This really makes things interesting. Keep writing :)