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| Black Kage Kitsune 2005-08-17 ch 1,   | Hard times and easy times make us stronger. Everyone wishes that they could go back and change what has happened in the past. I know what I would of tried to undo but that is the past. I think sometimes it gets to the point where we don't want to try anymore. A breaking point as it were. I find it hard to walk away from things but at times like this I have to...Sorry if you aren't getting what I'm trying to say. |
| erised i 2005-08-16 ch 1, | I love the last lines of each verse, each ending with again. Your poem is simple and straightfoward, and that's what makes them a great read. |