I especially loved the ending line, "Rain, rain go away; Come again another day"

Just a perfect ending. It was beautiful, I loved it, like all your songs!

Luv, Anne Hereatta

True Child of the Xenu

I like the images you used and how you used intense wording because it is about a storm, I really don't know that much about poetry or song lyrics but I came across this and I enjoyed reading it, and think it sounds lovely.

I like this! Powerful chorus and the ending seems really haunting to me. Really good piece. QueenVixta

This is a very emotional song and you wrote it well. It's cool, ok not the righ t word but whatever how you use a storm to describe affects of pain, I never thought of it like that but it makes since