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Lysette the little vampire 2007-06-29 . chapter 7
This is an amazing story. Once again, you've dazzled me and withing 6 chapters had me crying merlin knows how many times. I started reading all of your stories after I finished Dearly Beloved and this may be my favorite of them all (behind Dearly Beloved of course!),but yes, back on track. The characters adn emotion are just amazing and the whole thing is -excuse my total nerdiness- groovy beyond belief. ^^ Well, lots of love and hopes of updates:
~Lysette
Lucy! 2006-11-12 . chapter 7
it's been more than a year since you have updated it, but i guess they say hope is the last thing you lose...
meh i'd really like to know how it ends! i mean you stoped writting in the best part!
i wanna know if Mitchell is with Daniell cos he's alike his bro.
And doesn't Daniell realize this?
man! so many freaking questions!
His mom will seriosly lost it! it makes it even funnier =P

awesome story, you knew it though.
No Free Refills 2006-01-28 . chapter 7
would have been interesting if Kyle had slit his wrists, and Daniel walked in and didn't notice, and they kissed, and the blood seeped into his hair..

etc.

anywho, it was a bit predictable.. and Nina and Daniel coming in at the same day..(when was the food delivered?)

good though. very good.
Wolfwitch 2005-10-21 . chapter 7
That was really big of him, being nice to Nina like that. And molesting the ex-priest sounds like fun.
Tom 2005-10-20 . chapter 7
lol! Brill! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Jiro 2005-10-19 . chapter 7
I'm confused... I thought Kyle had just gotten the girl pregnant but if Nina has already named him then I'm assuming the kid's already been born? When did this happen?
ShadowGal 2005-10-19 . chapter 7
*snickers at the last three lines* Well, he is a guy, after all, isn't he.

I feel sorry for Mitchell. And Nina. And Daniel. But not Kyle. *shrugs* What can I say? Dead now or not, he was still being a cowardly jerk, and I don't feel particularly compelled to forgive him just yet. Cheating is not cool.

Anyways, very interesting chapter. I liked it a lot. Can't wait for the next update!
Cookie Gestapo 2005-10-19 . chapter 7
Wow I'm not even Mitch and I'm having mixed emotions about the whole thing.

V_V
K. T. Wood 2005-10-19 . chapter 7
Whoa. That was an emotional chapter! Woot. They KISSED! That is so bloody exciting! Woot! YAY! Sorry. Exams suck me off all intelligent words. Love it.
K. T. Wood 2005-10-16 . chapter 6
I'll pinch him! *wink wink*. Hehe. WOOT! Progress! Oh, wow. Poor guy. That's horrible. UPDATE
Wolfwitch 2005-10-15 . chapter 6
Wow. Angsty priest. Must molest...
gal 2005-10-12 . chapter 6
woah .. intense.. nicely done, keep up the good work.
We're not working out 2005-10-12 . chapter 6
I love this story. To bad that Kyle was cheating on him... what a **.Waiting for more,-Shari
Cookie Gestapo 2005-10-12 . chapter 6
Suddenly I don't really care about Kyles death.

That sucks, how could he do that to Mitchell? Wow so many things are running through my head now because of that. I honestly feel bad for Mitchell now. I wish he would have found out before Kyles death. I wish he would have found out so he could have quit the relationship before. Atleast it wouldn't be _as_ painful.

I mean wow, he finds out after Kyles death. Now that's a blow to the heart. First he and his boyfriend start having alot of fights, then his boy-friend dies and then only six months later he finds out his boyfriends was cheating on him and the girl was three months (which means the baby is born right around now).

God I think I would go try that whole suicide thing again if I were him. Or atleast start hating Kyle with a passion and throw everything that reminded me of him out and move to a diffrent city where I could start over new. You know?

And here I was feeling all bad for Kyle the bastard. Hmph, I think he deserved it...well maybe not death but he did deserve something like I dunno becoming paralysed then have the girlfriend leave him and say she's giving the baby up for adoption because it would be better than having and _knowing_ one of it's parents are disabled (No I do not believe that myself) and then have Mitchell find out and break up with him and tell him to take all his stuff and just go.

Oh yea. Revenge is sweet baby.

But I'm done with my Kyle bashing rant. But now lets move on to Daniel.

Woah what an ego booster at the wrong time. I would love to know I was the reason he turned into a priest. Ad maybe just maybe Mitchell is better looking than he thinks to be and is portraying himself as.

Also when i read that Daniel was thirty-two and a virgin I began to crack up. And then I had a flash of this old wrinkley priest and began to feel bad. Do they stay a virgin their whole life? I mean wow right. How do they do it?

Lol okay I'm done now.

You keep up the good work and keep these chapters coming.
Jiro 2005-10-12 . chapter 6
Wow, you'd think Kyle's ** of a mother would've whipped that painful tidbit out and waved it around like a banner. I guess she didn't know... which begs the question: does the knocked up girl even know Kyle's dead? If she did, she'd have gone to the funeral though, right? And maybe have said something to his parents... Man, Daniel's hot. That's a complete 180 but somethings just need to be said. Daniel is hot.
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