|Reviews for Songbird|
| InspirASIAN 8/9/05 . chapter 1
eh? i hop theres more, i'll be waiting 4 more!
| Mister Pillow 8/8/05 . chapter 1
I must say you have an interesting writing style which I enjoy. However, I must alert you of two things:
The redundancy at the end of your story is rather annoying. There are many other ways to wrap up the prolouge without that and still efficentily delivering the message to the reader that you intended to give.
Second, I urge you to make larger updates then just a small prolouge. Try to at LEAST get a page published every time you update. I am not saying to write a page every time you go to work on your story but only publish when it will be a lengthy update. I am looking forward to the rest of the story and hope you will meet my expectations.