I just spent my whole day reading this, and I have to say: it was totally worth it!

I really, really loved the usual "fall in love with my brother's best friend" cliche, because you put a twist to it to make it more interesting!

I especially loved the characters. You made them easily relatable, but you also made them very human. I like how the main character had her flaws that she had to work through, even if she didn't notice that they even existed at first. Tally and Jack didn't have the perfect relationship at all times, but that made it perfect. And, for some reason, I smiled when I noticed that Matt and Kristen ended up dating. No idea why, but I just did :)

You know, looking back... I don't think there was anything I DIDN'T like XD So, yeah, brilliant job! :) This is a definite favorite of mine.

aw very sweet im adding it to my favorites!!

pash rash = razor burn or stubble rash
p.s. love the story

Hey!
ive just finished reading ur story...i was up till 6am last night (well really this morning) reading it!...i know that probably seems a little crazy, but its what i do when i read books...lol...anyways...this is such a good story!...i was always wondering what the next chapter has in store for me...i really like the way uve written it...it flowed well, and lots of stuff happened, but not too much at once...if u no what i mean...anyway...really good story...was there any significance to the kids names at the end??...they seemed pretty random...but in most stories theres usually a reason... anyway...well done!

Really cute story. I loved the ending and all the twists. Good job!

Truly amazing.
I know it's been nearly 4 years since you put up the last chapter, but I just had to tell you how amazing your story is. You can set up a scene so well, with perfect use of similes, the dialogue is realistic, and the story progresses very well. It's a brilliant idea, and the characters are consistent. Talia always has a bit of bitch about her and I love it.
It could do with a couple more commas, but who cares about the minorities, when the majority is just mind blowing. I like how Jack and Tally break-up for a while, in Jack's email, I mean, and you left that to our imagination. There were some great mystery bits, where I was curious about what was going on, like when Simone slapped Micky, and the reason behind that shocked me! I'm glad you didn't make Sam stereotypical, that was great, that way it was more of a shock.
Anyway, sorry to go on, I was just so happy my friends told me to read it - and that I stuck to it, since I have such a short attention span, but how can you not get glued to such an amazing story.
I dare you to publish this, because I would buy it. I'm about to start His Saving Grace, and I hope it's just as amazing as this.
Well done,
CGIL xx

That was such a cute story! i just finished it, you did really well not making it exactly the same cliche of falling in love with your bothers best friend.. It had its own twists!! :D

ah. a few tears escaped.
doesnt help that i'm listening to a song thats very emotional and sad... ;P
lol.
aw~ they had twins :) lol
thanks so much for this awesome story!!

LOVED this story but what hell is with some of your language. half the time i thought you were basing this story in england! so many of the 'slang' words you used were British and im australian so i would know.
sod < British...please get your countries language right please. otherwise GREAT STORY!

This story was wonderful. I really enjoyed kind of being taken to another world (I'm American). It was really interesting to see the dynamics between the friends and how they all kind of got their stories (and signals) crossed. I liked how you ended the story because it gave Jack and Talia closure, but still left a little to the imagination. Only one grammar mistake that I noticed (and it's not an Americanism vs. Australianism thing) is that you use "then" instead of "than". Then is used with time and "then what would you have me do?". Than is used in comparisons. More than, less than, etc.

i really love your story, jack isn't perfect and actaully that's what makes him so irresistible. And thank you, natalia isn't a shy bookworm but a strong minded woman, no cliche here.

your writing is agreable , funny and witty, it's a pleasure to follow theirs adventures. Congratulation you make me read it twice (something i never do). let me applause you for this story !

Damn... How I wish there was a Jack around to take my virginity.

I love this story it is amazing!! I really love the ending it sounds alot like some thing in my own life...

omfg! this girl is way too cute! wonder how long its gonna take for the romance to come it!!

Love this chapter!!