|Reviews for sometimes love doesn't seem love|
| Twilight Starr 11/14/07 . chapter 1
This is so sad. Good song.
| Seth Triskellion 8/26/05 . chapter 1
wow that was really good. I loved the ring ring and splash splash additions... you've been doing some really great writing in my absence
| Lacus 8/5/05 . chapter 1
I like how you used the sounds like, "Splash, Splash" To give the reader the idea of what you were hearing. Also I like this line-
"autumn leaves visits the city."
Heh, it's just me, I have a think with autumn and leaves, I love 'em, I like when they crunch beneath my feet.
Anyhow, very well done.