|Reviews for Deadly Seizure|
| Moonjava 8/30/05 . chapter 1
'Toxic dreams, my friends.'I like that one. Very nice.
| ThisCut-UpAngel 8/17/05 . chapter 1
*sits in shock* this is so powerful! Amazing piece!
| Yuki Satu 8/12/05 . chapter 1
wow, thats written pretty neat.
| Jen calculates 8/8/05 . chapter 1
Makes me want to hear what it sounds like now...
Very nicely written. Jen
| youzi 8/7/05 . chapter 1
what an innovative way to direct the flow of this poem! i really liked how you tried to dictate how each line should be read..very fresh idea..do keep writing D
| jeek 8/5/05 . chapter 1
wow, this is REALLY good. i love the flow and the way the words work together. i just wish i could hear the music.