| Reviews for Deadly Seizure |
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Moonjava 8/30/05 . chapter 1'Toxic dreams, my friends.'I like that one. Very nice. |
ThisCut-UpAngel 8/17/05 . chapter 1*sits in shock* this is so powerful! Amazing piece! |
Yuki Satu 8/12/05 . chapter 1wow, thats written pretty neat. |
Jen calculates 8/8/05 . chapter 1Makes me want to hear what it sounds like now... Very nicely written. Jen |
youzi 8/7/05 . chapter 1what an innovative way to direct the flow of this poem! i really liked how you tried to dictate how each line should be read..very fresh idea..do keep writing D |
jeek 8/5/05 . chapter 1wow, this is REALLY good. i love the flow and the way the words work together. i just wish i could hear the music. |