 Noihseret 2006-07-11 . chapter 1oh the poor cute, cuddly widdle dwagon...
I'm sencing a heavy medaphor here.
I especially like this peice. very powerful. I love how you portrayed the baby dragon as being scary to everyone else, but you saw past all that and loved him anyway.
the last lines were pure genius too ^^ they were probably my favourites.
"You were so strong But you were The weakest out of the Three."
the only mistake I found was "Thy made you fly out of" should be they?
this one's goin to meh favourites... bwahaha. write on! ^^ |