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Noihseret 2006-07-11 . chapter 1
oh the poor cute, cuddly widdle dwagon...

I'm sencing a heavy medaphor here.

I especially like this peice. very powerful. I love how you portrayed the baby dragon as being scary to everyone else, but you saw past all that and loved him anyway.

the last lines were pure genius too ^^ they were probably my favourites.

"You were so strong But you were The weakest out of the Three."

the only mistake I found was "Thy made you fly out of" should be they?

this one's goin to meh favourites... bwahaha. write on! ^^
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